So this is the plot that I have in mind for the "One and No Other" novel, which the one I wrote in this blog. So, for the time being it would seems that I want Chastity and Elian would revealed their true identity as an Ararck. Which I would found it would be interesting that the two of them are quite suspicious to one to the other. Elian was a famous blue ararck knight, which it would shock the out Chastity and makes her think twice about what she should do with the man. All I could think for right now is that, and I want to involve Zachary when he return back home after he goes out. I want to make Zachary to be a geek around ararck's world and he's reaction need to be more interesting.
Anyhow that's for now, and I need comment and help for getting the idea for the plot. It would be interesting if I have more option than what I have right now.
Kamis, 08 Desember 2011
Rabu, 07 Desember 2011
Review
So, it's been a long time since the last time I actually post something. But I've been busy and I'm just feeling better. But I'll try to post more about my novel and what comes with it. I introuduce you to a novel name A.n.D last year, if I'm not mistaking, and I finally got the playby for each of the characters that come out in the first book. I would post it soon. Also, I have another idea for a brand new novel and I would post the idea, plot and the characters personalities as well. I would love feed back about this brand new novel, because first I need help to come out with the names. I don't feel like using name that close to the characters from my other novel. It is very frustrating when you couldn't come up with names because than I couldn't start the novel, lol. Next I would say this is about the novel I posted here, I might need a plot helping and have insider from the reader, so please post comment when I writting about the plot of the novel if you interested. And lastly of course I would post the continuation of the "One and No Other" novel.
Happy reading, and comments are always welcome.
Happy reading, and comments are always welcome.
Minggu, 31 Juli 2011
One and No Other (Chapter 2 Part 2)
Evidently the lil' woman's house was not far. The house look small and old from the outside but inside... Well, you could it was big enough for two people livin' in it. Not to mention the house look more high tech than all the house he see. It makes him curious as well as make him cautious. Whoever the lil' woman is, she's not what he seems to think. She lives with her younger brother by three years. He had a blonde hair though a bit darker than his sister had. And the same green eyes. Just like an emerald. "Sis, what took you so long to home?" Her brother asked. The lil' woman shrugged and answered with an annoying grinned, "Well, this and that."
The little brother tsked and said, "You have to have better answer than that!"
"Nope, now go out just like you plan too, before I kicked you out." The lil' woman said. Her brother scowled but do just exactly like she said, "I'm going now." The lil' woman goes to the kitchen and called him, "Now. Eating time!" Elian chuckled. The lil' woman is bossy. But he follow anyway. He was starving and he owe the little woman a explanation.
When he got in to the kitchen, he found out that the kitchen was a complete different than the entire house. It's cozy and it's more a nature type of kitchen. The kitchen used lots of wood. Well, it's like a cabin kitchen if you need more description. It was lovely. And he would bet that the kitchen is the heart of this house instead the living room.
"You like it?" The lil' woman suddenly asked. He look to the lil' woman in confusion. "The kitchen?" She clarified. He nodded and sit to the chair at the counter. "It's cozy."
"Well, I love it as well. Benedict did a great job this time." She said with a pride for her younger brother. Than she turn around, take out a dish and put the food on the top of it. "Is pasta okay with you?" She asked though already put the plate in front of him. The dish is mouth watering, but the real reason is that he miss pasta. "Yeah, I haven't eat pasta for ages." He said. The lil' woman smile at him with an understanding. "I know. It's a luxury for us just could eat this stuff."
Elian rise an eye brow, but the lil' woman just pointed the food and he got the picture. Eat first then talk. Hopefully he got answer just like she does about him.
Chapter Two Part Two done.
The little brother tsked and said, "You have to have better answer than that!"
"Nope, now go out just like you plan too, before I kicked you out." The lil' woman said. Her brother scowled but do just exactly like she said, "I'm going now." The lil' woman goes to the kitchen and called him, "Now. Eating time!" Elian chuckled. The lil' woman is bossy. But he follow anyway. He was starving and he owe the little woman a explanation.
When he got in to the kitchen, he found out that the kitchen was a complete different than the entire house. It's cozy and it's more a nature type of kitchen. The kitchen used lots of wood. Well, it's like a cabin kitchen if you need more description. It was lovely. And he would bet that the kitchen is the heart of this house instead the living room.
"You like it?" The lil' woman suddenly asked. He look to the lil' woman in confusion. "The kitchen?" She clarified. He nodded and sit to the chair at the counter. "It's cozy."
"Well, I love it as well. Benedict did a great job this time." She said with a pride for her younger brother. Than she turn around, take out a dish and put the food on the top of it. "Is pasta okay with you?" She asked though already put the plate in front of him. The dish is mouth watering, but the real reason is that he miss pasta. "Yeah, I haven't eat pasta for ages." He said. The lil' woman smile at him with an understanding. "I know. It's a luxury for us just could eat this stuff."
Elian rise an eye brow, but the lil' woman just pointed the food and he got the picture. Eat first then talk. Hopefully he got answer just like she does about him.
Chapter Two Part Two done.
Senin, 25 Juli 2011
One and No Other (Chapter 2 Part 1)
I don't how long we stand like that, but I was sure it's not very long. Although for me it was like hours, and it seems everything move very slowly. If I was found out in this kind of place, I wouldn't know what to do with Benedict. He's going to be a fit fight, and would try to find me. If I'm not being killed first that is. "I think we're saves." Suddenly Elian tell me.
"Are you sure?" I whisepered. "Yes. The man is gone." he said. It such a surprise that he knows how much the man actually is and if he was gone or not. I don't what should I make of him. "How long do you think before he would search this place again?" I asked. I turned around just in time to watch his sigh. "It would at least another hour. Since he been doing this for hours no days."
"So he is chasing you." I said. Although it was not a question, he still nodded as a confirmation. "Why?" I asked. Elian seems to consider if he should tell me why, and he seems not so sure if I could be trust. I don't know why, but I feel that I want him to trust me. He seems the kind of person who wouldn't trust any body fast and he's cautious person. However, after all this, though not that much, I want him to trust me. Since I already tell him something that I shouldn't say. An ararck present never should get notice by a mere human. All the have to think is that we are one of them. But once we were found out or feel threaten we have to move from the town we live.
"It's kind a long story." Elian said.
"I have time and a comfortable house near by with food waiting to talk in." I said hopefully.
Elian look blank at me for awhile, and than give me a smile. "You know, lil' woman, you have something that some people said annoying. But you're persistent you know that." He said to me. "Yes. Everyone that knows me said that about me. As well as stubborn and opinionate." I said to him, which turn his smile to a grinned. "Alright than, show the house of yours." he said to me. And I just hope he wouldn't notice the house that my brother cast.
Chapter Two Part One done.
"Are you sure?" I whisepered. "Yes. The man is gone." he said. It such a surprise that he knows how much the man actually is and if he was gone or not. I don't what should I make of him. "How long do you think before he would search this place again?" I asked. I turned around just in time to watch his sigh. "It would at least another hour. Since he been doing this for hours no days."
"So he is chasing you." I said. Although it was not a question, he still nodded as a confirmation. "Why?" I asked. Elian seems to consider if he should tell me why, and he seems not so sure if I could be trust. I don't know why, but I feel that I want him to trust me. He seems the kind of person who wouldn't trust any body fast and he's cautious person. However, after all this, though not that much, I want him to trust me. Since I already tell him something that I shouldn't say. An ararck present never should get notice by a mere human. All the have to think is that we are one of them. But once we were found out or feel threaten we have to move from the town we live.
"It's kind a long story." Elian said.
"I have time and a comfortable house near by with food waiting to talk in." I said hopefully.
Elian look blank at me for awhile, and than give me a smile. "You know, lil' woman, you have something that some people said annoying. But you're persistent you know that." He said to me. "Yes. Everyone that knows me said that about me. As well as stubborn and opinionate." I said to him, which turn his smile to a grinned. "Alright than, show the house of yours." he said to me. And I just hope he wouldn't notice the house that my brother cast.
Chapter Two Part One done.
One and No Other (Chapter 1 Part 5)
The only thing that let me not to melt all over was that he said lil' woman to me. Now that I think of him he's top me at least one foot or even more, and I never felt so self-concious of my height. Benedict, my brother, does top me, but since I thought him as my baby brother, that's why I never need to count about his height. But this was different. He was someone I just know, help me once and saved me once. And, well it's just a new novelty. Than I look to his laughing blue eyes, and it was one of the bluest eyes I ever see.
"Are you a Spaniard?" I asked. Since by his name he supposed to be a Spanish. "I do. At least half Spanish. My mother came from Boston." he said."I see. Where do you live? Or are you new here?" I asked. If I'm not a very sensitive person I wouldn't notice that he's stiffen a bit when I asked that.
"Yes, I'm new here. I just arrived today." he answered.
I look at him more carefully than said, "Are you the one who was being chase instead of me? I mean if I felt dangerous before this I would already left this town." I said. but that's when I realize I told him something I shouldn't have. He raised his eye brow but there's shock to in his eyes. Either I said something right or he thinks if what I said worth to know.
"Why do you being chase?" he asked slowly. "I didn't say that I was being chase." I said defensively. Amazing that we just know each other a few minutes ago and he act as if I have to answer everything to him. But before I could said anything, we heard the same foot step, or the running steps before. Instinctively I press myself deeper the the alley but what surprise me is that Elian hide me with his height and big body. He pose as a sheild and we hide inside the darkness. And I was hopeful for the foot steps to go away from here.
Chapter One Part Five done.
"Are you a Spaniard?" I asked. Since by his name he supposed to be a Spanish. "I do. At least half Spanish. My mother came from Boston." he said."I see. Where do you live? Or are you new here?" I asked. If I'm not a very sensitive person I wouldn't notice that he's stiffen a bit when I asked that.
"Yes, I'm new here. I just arrived today." he answered.
I look at him more carefully than said, "Are you the one who was being chase instead of me? I mean if I felt dangerous before this I would already left this town." I said. but that's when I realize I told him something I shouldn't have. He raised his eye brow but there's shock to in his eyes. Either I said something right or he thinks if what I said worth to know.
"Why do you being chase?" he asked slowly. "I didn't say that I was being chase." I said defensively. Amazing that we just know each other a few minutes ago and he act as if I have to answer everything to him. But before I could said anything, we heard the same foot step, or the running steps before. Instinctively I press myself deeper the the alley but what surprise me is that Elian hide me with his height and big body. He pose as a sheild and we hide inside the darkness. And I was hopeful for the foot steps to go away from here.
Chapter One Part Five done.
Elian and Chastity (Anime Version)
Elian Hernandes. At least this is the anime Version. Dark hair and the most important part, blue eyes are definitely a killer. Hot shot and a badass, Elian always think of the person that important to him first before he put himself. Such a attitude is the good and weak point of his. But that's why I love him very much.
So this is my Two main characters in One and No Other. I would post the real human version soon enough.
Minggu, 24 Juli 2011
One and No Other (Chapter 1 Part 4)
I wasn't sure what happen, but I know that today's the most weirdest day I ever had. Not to mention the most excited day I ever had too. I was just finish my last day work. It was eight o'clock at night and I was saying good bye to my boss and Sillia who would work until midnight. Until then everything seems to be normal. But as I walk back home. I felt that someone actually following me but not so sure if it's true. I never thought that I would be found in this place. I mean this is might not be the perfect place to live but most of the people still a human not an ararck just like us.
But when I felt that the person still following, I start to walk faster. I don't know what to do except that, since it would be trouble some if I start a riot here. As time goes, I keep up my pace until I actually running. It's official, I thought, that I would never stalk someone because it's so creepy to be follow even when you run as fast as you could run. I was running and checking, actually I look behind to look who's trying to follow me when someone take me to the alley and close my mouth with his big hand when I try to scream. "Be quiet." I heard the hard whispered and surprise that I kind a know that voice.
I still my body and focus on the footsteps of the one who follow me. And then the running footsteps goes by the alley untol I couldn't hear the sound anymore. And that's when I relax my body. And the hand that shut my mouth released. I took a few deep breath before looking to the person who saved me. Again.
Yes, it's the same person who saved me today from falling down with a heavy box. "Thank you." I whispered to the man. "Your welcome." He said.
I don't know why such a gorgeous guy actually come out in this kind of place but I'm grateful that he was here. "No I mean it. I never had this kind of experience before." And out of nowhere the guy suddenly smile with amusement at me. Well at least a half smile. "Well, since you actually saved two times in one day today. It would be such a shame if I didn't know your name."
Than I gasped, "Well that's impolite of me. I should give you my name first. I'm Chastity Summer. I live around here." Then he give me a full smile this time, and I have to fight from melting because his smile. Than with his deep and sexy voices he said, "I'm Elian Hernandes. Nice to meet you, lil' woman."
Chapter One Part Four done.
But when I felt that the person still following, I start to walk faster. I don't know what to do except that, since it would be trouble some if I start a riot here. As time goes, I keep up my pace until I actually running. It's official, I thought, that I would never stalk someone because it's so creepy to be follow even when you run as fast as you could run. I was running and checking, actually I look behind to look who's trying to follow me when someone take me to the alley and close my mouth with his big hand when I try to scream. "Be quiet." I heard the hard whispered and surprise that I kind a know that voice.
I still my body and focus on the footsteps of the one who follow me. And then the running footsteps goes by the alley untol I couldn't hear the sound anymore. And that's when I relax my body. And the hand that shut my mouth released. I took a few deep breath before looking to the person who saved me. Again.
Yes, it's the same person who saved me today from falling down with a heavy box. "Thank you." I whispered to the man. "Your welcome." He said.
I don't know why such a gorgeous guy actually come out in this kind of place but I'm grateful that he was here. "No I mean it. I never had this kind of experience before." And out of nowhere the guy suddenly smile with amusement at me. Well at least a half smile. "Well, since you actually saved two times in one day today. It would be such a shame if I didn't know your name."
Than I gasped, "Well that's impolite of me. I should give you my name first. I'm Chastity Summer. I live around here." Then he give me a full smile this time, and I have to fight from melting because his smile. Than with his deep and sexy voices he said, "I'm Elian Hernandes. Nice to meet you, lil' woman."
Chapter One Part Four done.
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